Name : SELVI
AGUSTINA
SRN :
2113053
Hidup
indah berukir kebahagiaan
Canda
dan tawa kian kemari
Menggapai
angan-angan tersimpan
Harapan
sesuai dengan kenyataan hati
Hiasi
dengan syukur
Tepis
kan anggapan hina
Lukiskan
kemahiran dibumi makmur
Meski
bukan turunan sang raja
Dalam
termenung sambil yakinkan
Sukses
milik semua orang
Welcome
a man of mean
Hapuskan
kesuraman petang
Kokohkan
pendirian sapa harapan
Sukses
bukan impian tanpa harapan
Light
Heart for mom
When moonlight is come
arise
My mom is mine angel
In my
sweet dream hope completely out of my control
She is
smile for heart whole
Your
love is such as rabbit feathers
Your
dear is just like droprainy
It
always rise for your children don’t feel weary
A bed
of roses for my worlds
You are my
strength for my life
The entire evening
sky would be in the palm of your hand
Your smile
is water that always flow
In every
time in step of mine
Your love is
beauty and my breath
you are my
only reason to stay alive and reach my dream
great...two sonnets..
BalasHapusAgain, for suggestion, please concern on rhyme, syllables, and the diction..
I have question, in what reason you use 'rabbit feather' as a symbol for your mom's love????
keep spirit..
yes sir, thanks for your suggest, i use rabbit of feather because mother loves is soft
BalasHapusthese is a good sonnet, and your title is interest to me
BalasHapusbut you must check again your syllable, rhyme and the other..
because there are many mistake in the sentences ...
yosssh ;)